Research and Planning 13/20 (C) Production 19/60 (U)
You have completed sound research into similar products and the target audience. Planning is evident. To improve further include more detailed analysis of similar magazines, and summarise what you found out about the conventions of music magazines. Complete a production plan and draft of text.
Your product demonstrates a good understanding of magazine conventions, and makes effective use of fonts, colours, images, text, and layout. To improve further consider making the font of the standfirst larger. You also need to fill the empty space on the bottom right of the double page spread, you could try moving your pull-quote acorss. As your product is incomplete you currently cannot achieve higher than a Level 1. You now need to complete your contents page immediately.
Research and Planning 13/20 (C)
ReplyDeleteProduction 19/60 (U)
You have completed sound research into similar products and the target audience. Planning is evident. To improve further include more detailed analysis of similar magazines, and summarise what you found out about the conventions of music magazines. Complete a production plan and draft of text.
Your product demonstrates a good understanding of magazine conventions, and makes effective use of fonts, colours, images, text, and layout. To improve further consider making the font of the standfirst larger. You also need to fill the empty space on the bottom right of the double page spread, you could try moving your pull-quote acorss. As your product is incomplete you currently cannot achieve higher than a Level 1. You now need to complete your contents page immediately.